Overnight
Very suddenly
Beyond completely
I’ve fallen
So in love with you
Have you fallen too?
Shuddering
In quiet suspense
As your lips touch mine
Wondering
Whether I can bear
A moment like this
Billowing
In the swell and swirl
Moving in rhythm
Frenzied rush
As we climb and soar
Heights not known before
Breathing
Erratic, in gasps
Bliss to feel like this
After just one kiss…
beautiful!
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Thank you Robert, glad you enjoyed it 😀
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Wow! For two reasons – (i) it’s truly lovely and (ii) I’ve just put up a piece on a single touch and it’s effect on me.
THAT word again, Chev?
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hmm THAT word is going to get me into trouble:-)
Imagination is a powerful thing huh! Even better when it resonates 😊 Btw, I made a few changes to the story after you had read it – hope you’ll still appreciate it.I’ll be ending at No. 10
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OK, headed back…
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Still like it as much as I did earlier 🙂
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Thank you,the changes were subtle though significant in where I’m heading.:-) Now keep your high note – have a great day!
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Oooohhh chile!!!
🙂
ooh la la!
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It was just my imagination – playing around with me. YOU KNOW THAT SONG Chile😀
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You KNOW I do !!!! LOL!!
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And sometimes you gotta just go wit da flow!
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No doubt!
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Exploring the tension inside the sweetness…I loved it.
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Hello Mr T.Wayne – hey when you’re a celebrity will you still know me ? 😀 Yes, sometimes the anticipation may be sweeter than the real thing😀
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Hahahaha! Of course…but to answer the question implies that I’m becoming a celebrity…with all the perks and pitfalls that may contain! 🙂
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Ah come on – you can be Prince for a day 😀
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Hahaha! Prince for a day! Cool.
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This is a total Princess Bride kiss–it’s true love, do you think this happens every day? Loved it, Chevvy. 🙂
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Joan, you are such a princess yourself for understanding how my mind works. This most certainly doesn’t happen everyday to everyone,that’s why there are so many fantasy readers out there. Glad you enjoyed it my dear😀
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Only one?
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Just one otherwise you’d be lost forever😀
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LOL!
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So romantic…just one kiss and loads of emotions …I loved it… 🙂
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I’ve been told that the two emotions that give birth to all others are Love and Fear – so there’s no getting away from these emotions … and a touch of romance is what many dream of 😀
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