Freedom’s rain

Free in her season

A promiscuous lover

We each have our turn

Generous to some

Doling out liberation

Moisture for their yield

When she comes too late

We lay victims in her wake

Floods on parched land

Bloody waters run

Where umbrellas are raised

A reign over rain

We pray on this day

For equal distribution

Of similar rain

Let Freedom reign

Showering abundantly

On us equally


23 thoughts on “Freedom’s rain

      1. Great! I won’t abandon my playfulness but I’m not oblivious to the serious challenges we contend with in our societies. Sometimes freedom is not just political or economic freedom, it’s also about how we free ourselves. Have a lovely day SweetheartπŸ’ž

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      2. Free ourselves …how true ! From the chains we choose to wear sometimes , from narrow walls that we confine ourselves within true ! I loved that thought , Chev !

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    1. Thank you very much Shweta. You are most welcome. I must make time to visit your blog after a short break. I noticed that you’ve been to Gstaad – would love to read more about your experience. In the meanwhile, do enjoy your day! Best. chevvy


  1. I like the line ‘let freedom reign’ and the implied pun: freedom ‘raining’ is also intriguing too!
    And thank you for the follow! πŸ™‚
    I wonder could I borrow that lovely image please? Quite understand if you say no! :))

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    1. Hello Marie. I hope you are doing well. I’ve been very busy over the past week, not much time to blog unfortunately.

      Glad you appreciated this poem and its nuances. You are more than welcome to use the image. I got it off the internet. It had no copyright attached.
      Btw, the outcome I spoke to you about last week – It all came together yesterday. It’s to do with my work. I’m hoping it’s going to offer exciting opportunities but it will mean that I’ll have less time for bloggingπŸ˜‰

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      1. I am so happy for you that the outcome was what you wanted Chevvy. Well done! Congratulations!!!!! :)))
        Every silver lining has a cloud doesn’t it? lol I hope that we still have our connection even though it will mean you’ll have less time blogging. I’m tempted to say, not to accept the offer and continue blogging as much as possible. NOT REALLY!!!! JOKING!!!!
        I’m so over-the-moon for you and am sending you a huge hug. πŸ™‚

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      2. Thank you Marie, this has been a long time coming and I hope it meets my expectations. I don’t expect to be lost to blogging, will just need to manage my time. I’m on your blog as we speakπŸ˜€


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