Waterfall dreams September 19, 2015April 20, 2020 by Chevvy, posted in Poetry Darkness enfolds with featherlight touches Breaths ascend In staircase rushes Momentous release In effervescent gushes Share this:TwitterFacebookLike Loading... Related
Thank you Lynz – the picture is Victoria Falls – still one of the places to go on my bucket lisr:-) LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
I know the feeling. I thought blogging was a way to relax but I find that in any creative pursuit, I get totally immersed. But we do need our sleep:-) LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m told that it is about calming the mind before you sleep – I still haven’t cracked that one. but I’ll keep trying coz I need my beauty sleep:-) LikeLiked by 1 person
Very nicely written, Chevvy. It was like the beauty on waterfalls with romantic words. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Thank you, glad you enjoyed. It was meant to achieve both using the metaphor of the waterfall. Thank you for your follow:-) LikeLike Reply
Now that I re-look at it, I like the words to and while I don’t know you well enough, I can see translating the imagery:-) LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
lovely, the picture is amazing as well
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Thank you Lynz – the picture is Victoria Falls – still one of the places to go on my bucket lisr:-)
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wow amazing! so beautiful! I can see why
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Now when do you sleep woman? I find you awake at all hours of the day:-)
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Haha i have trouble sleeping tbese days lol
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I know the feeling. I thought blogging was a way to relax but I find that in any creative pursuit, I get totally immersed. But we do need our sleep:-)
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After turning 50 its worst just hard to sleep lol
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I’m told that it is about calming the mind before you sleep – I still haven’t cracked that one. but I’ll keep trying coz I need my beauty sleep:-)
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Yes i think that is true about calming the mind
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Very nicely written, Chevvy. It was like the beauty on waterfalls with romantic words.
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed. It was meant to achieve both using the metaphor of the waterfall. Thank you for your follow:-)
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Great picture. Love the last part – effervescent gushes…
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Now that I re-look at it, I like the words to and while I don’t know you well enough, I can see translating the imagery:-)
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I love “effervescent gushes”. Beautiful poem.
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Thank you, I’m glad you love it – so do I 🙂 and welcome to my blog.
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