
Moist and sweet.
Rosebud opening
Leaves unfurling
Droplets falling.
Juicy, Wet, Standing
Waiting. Then the rush!
I got caught up in it…
Then… I was
Drenched and spent.

Moist and sweet.
Rosebud opening
Leaves unfurling
Droplets falling.
Juicy, Wet, Standing
Waiting. Then the rush!
I got caught up in it…
Then… I was
Drenched and spent.
Wow, how you allude…
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No, I was simply reflecting on getting caught in the rain:-)
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I see, beautiful none-the-less. Thank you.
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Thank you and I’m happy for you to appreciate the poem in all its meaning as a poet should. Apologies for the overloading, I’m still transferring from my previous end. Goodnight from the Southern Suns:-)
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So longer warmer hemisphere.
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It’s 3.25 a.m. in the morning, so long past sleeping hour for me, Bit chilly since its still the beginning of spring:-)
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Sounds like pleasant temps. It’s only 9:30pm. Love is fresh in the night air here. The eve has just begun.
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uh huh! Well enjoy the rest of your evening and thanks for the company!
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Goodnight.
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Yup! I’m switching off now:-)
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very nice and refreshing!
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Your words mesmerize me.
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Well, I take that as a huge compliment. Words are magic and poets are fanciful I have realised. My daytime work is very cerebral and this affords me good creative outlet so I have to mezmerize myself too. 🙂
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If you were indeed simply reflecting on getting caught in the rain… this is a very beautiful poem… But you must remember that poems are often perceived by the reader to mean something far different than what was intended… So I shall linger in my thoughts of the most beautiful of sensuality that I found in your writing and I thank you for the inspiration…
Michael
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Hi Michael. I’m pleased that you finally came to my studio and made yourself at home. I think you’ll find in many of poems undertones of sensuality and/or spirituality. I write for my own fun but also with a view that my poetry should talk to people in it’s own way. My disclaimer is that I have a mischievous side so this and other poems have a number of faces. Glad you enjoyed both:-)
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