
What shall we be
if not each other’s keeper
when night becomes the grim-reaper
What shall we do
if we can’t salt the earth
and our flint can’t fire give birth
What shall we say
of he who had vision but could not see
she who had time but was never free
What shall we offer
to a child who cries for his mother
when his hunger fuels hate for another
What will we find
when we peer to depths of our soul
will it be a mound or a big gaping hole
What shall I tell you
my dear friend – that your heart is on the mend
if we take hands and give shoulders to lend
Seize this moment to choose a side
will you stand up or seek a place to hide?

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Bravo, Chev!
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Thank you. You are always so good to me:-)(just noticed I didn’t press send) Btw you didn’t let me know if you figured out my poem the other day but I used a similar juxtaposition as you did but the answer is mine to keep:-)
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The one with multiple meanings?
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Yep!
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Thought I told you I got different meanings by combining different sentences in different ways to get a coherent whole (albeit not necessarily in the same way as you might’ve intended, but that’s the beauty of poetry)
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Yes that was the first one. But no matter:-)
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Chev, if there’s another I’ve missed, pl link it to me again. Will be happy to chk it out…
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OK> found it! On it!
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I was just trying to check whether my poetic devices worked to tighten it up but you don’t need to interpret here:-)
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Love this one, Chev. The choice is always ours, life is what we make it. So what shall it be? Make it a fabulous day! 🙂
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Oh I love your spirit Joan, you always bring a smile to my face and it’s contagious. Yes we make choices constantly. So here I am instead of going to my BA meeting:-) You have a great day too my friend!
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Shall we?
I pray that we shall make a truly conscious decision and take a stand–each one using his own talents, gifts and skills.
Just like you do Chevvy!
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You got it Sister!
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I love it! We ARE our brothers` keeper.
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Indeed we are – sista’s too 🙂
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🙂
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