
We were like two ships
Passing through the night
My perfume in the breeze
Yours, with smoke-filled trees
You made me pause
For a moment–
Inhale memories long forgotten,
Though occasional visitors
But I’ve tasted and drunk
Enough damp midnight air
Not to want to go back there.
Walk with me for awhile
Come and gaze through my window
Take a look at your possibility
To share the fragrance with me
And leave that stale air behind
The shore is not too far
If you take the dive with me
I have a torch, you have a spear
Together– we have nothing to fear!

Very romantic imagery, Chevvy but yet
You made me pause
For a moment–
Inhale memories long forgotten,
Though occasional visitors – that verse sticks with me and resonates.
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Funny, I didn’t think of the romance of the imagery so much but I appreciate you seeing that in the poem. Looking at it again with fresh eyes, I see the emphasis on associating memories with inhaling and breathing- Food for thought, even for me. So glad it resonated with you.
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Yes, it just reminded me of a current situation. Funny how the written word can do that.
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The mind is such an amazing thing in how it is triggered with words and images! Well whatever it is I hope you have the torch for light and guidance or the spear for power 😀
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The torch is sort of missing right now, the spear is possessed by someone else. It is a matter of timing.
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Well it’s good when you know where the solution lies, that is part of the light.
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Oh boy…this piece has stimulated a very interesting exchange between you and Susan. It must feel good to know that your work can touch people in ways that you might not have imagined.
Beautiful 🙏🏾
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I’m hoping that everyday, I’m touching someone’s life for the good. Therein lies my purpose I think. 😊
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You are Chevvy and I can attest to that my love!
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You know you make me want to cry when you say that!
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Now you are going to make ME cry!!!!!
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All’s good now – no need for either of us to cry.😊
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Not at all. We. Are. Good. GIRL!
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Hey Girl, good to see you while it’s still light outside😀 I’ve been mulling over your last post, will pop over to give my comment.
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With a torch and a spear, surely there’s nothing to fear. Every torch is needy of a spear, and vice versa. Life can never be more rewarding
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Okay, I’ve reblogged and thank you for the collaboration George. The tango was great! We can all do with a Torch and see the power of our spears!
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Pleasure is all mine. I’m amazed at the power of two heads
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I agree – totally Amazing! Thank you!
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Welcome
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