Each word
stripped the layers
like clothes
fallen…
to the floor
they just lay there-
carelessly strewn
silence did the rest…
Utterly floored
Each word
stripped the layers
like clothes
fallen…
to the floor
they just lay there-
carelessly strewn
silence did the rest…
Chevvy's diary 
I can read this two ways – does it have a happy ending, or…?
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ha!ha! You can read the poem in any way you like, let your imagination take you wherever you want to go. Personally, I like happy endings but what that means can be very much up to the reader:-)
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🙂
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A clue though – I choose my pictures carefully:-)
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Nothing that two adults can’t work out over glasses of fine wine 🙂
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Yeah – but I’m rethinking the absence of words:-)
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Doesn’t that follow as a natural progression? 😉
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I guess ellipses makes allowance for anything…
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LOL!
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I forgot to mention in my Smiley Blog award that I like comedy. My favorite comedian is our own Trevor Noah and part of the appeal of comedy is the play on words and the quick wit – so pardon me:-)
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I saw one Trevor Noah show on youtube when he performed in the UK, making fun of how the Brits “invited” themselves to S Africa, India, etc and met the natives…
Absolutely with you on the wit/puns – helps defuse a dicey situation
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Oh he is hilarious to get us all laughing at ourselves. They had re-runs on TV the whole of last week and had us in stitches. Don’t know if you follow our current affairs at all -it certainly makes for good material.
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I believe you allright and I’m very interested in world affairs, but between our local pack of jokers and Mr Trump, I think get my fill. Zuma and the Guptas can wait another day!
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And on that note I shall say cheers for now:-)
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Oh nice
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